One day I gave my daughter a blank sheet of white paper, unlined.
She ended up writing a story that I’m proud to say is a creative work of fiction!
And I’d like to share it with you here…
My Car’s Trip to Disneyland 29 – a story about cars
Characters: Daddy, Tia and Mia car
Daddy was taking Tia and Mia to Disneyland. “Come on!” cried Daddy car. “Let’s go!”
When they got there, Tia saw a ride. “Can I go on that slide ride, Daddy?” She asked.
“Sure,” Daddy said.
“I’m going on the slide ride, I’m going on the slide ride!” sang Tia as she, Mia, and Daddy drove to the “fun slide dog ride.”
“Whee!” cried Tia. “That was fun!”
“Oh, can I go on that slide ride, too?” cried Mia excitedly.
“Ok, sure,” said Daddy.
“Yyaay!” cried Mia, jumping up and down. “Whee!” said Mia. “That was fun!”
“Alright, girls, let’s go to a different ride,” said Daddy.
“Ok,” said Tia and Mia. “Oh, there’s another ride, Daddy, it’s a Merry-go-round,” said Mia.
“Let’s ride it,” said Daddy.
“Ok,” said Tia and Mia. “Yyayy!”
“Alright, girls, don’t get toooooo excited,” said Daddy.
“Whooooaaaaaa!” said Tia. “II feeell Diiiiizzzyy!”
“The ride’s gonna stop in one minute for us to get off, ok, Tia?” said Daddy, explaining what he knew about the Merry-go-round. “Plus, I’ve been here before, and I remember it was suppose to stop after 3 minutes.”
“But, Daddy,” said Tia, “My mouth feels hot. Can we go have some popsicles or any kind of cold food?”
“Uh, that’s a very strange comment and question, Tia,” said Daddy, “Well okay, you can have, uh, wait, what was that? Oh yeah, you can have orange flavored frozen lollipops.”
“Hooraaay!” shouted Tia and Mia, exitedley.
“My mouth feels hot, too,” said Mia, “I just started having it when you said ‘lollipop’ Daddy,” said Mia.
“Ok girls hop on me, and we’ll start going to the Frozen Dessert place,” said Daddy, as the merry-go-round ride stopped.
They waited in line. Finally it was their turn. “Can I get three frozen orange flavored lollipops?” Daddy asked the seller.
“Sure,” said the seller, “I’ll be right back with those.”
“Alright,” said Daddy.
The seller brought the frozen lollipop colds back with him.
“Mmm, yummy,” said Tia, Mia and Daddy.
“Oh let’s go home now. It’s almost dinner time.”
The End
Tags: Fun Friday, Marriage And Family


